#1
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to late lost my chance came in second place again
behind a glasswall them on one side me on the other
powerless to do anything i sit and watch
emotions build cant take much more

everything about her makes me happy
her smile her laugh just the way she talks
i cant stand to see her with someone else
For better or worse i told her how i felt i took the chance
just to find the answer i did'nt want to hear
it was exactly what i feared

he got what he wanted
got his chance beat me to her won again
no emotion he has to hold in
no wall seperating him from anyone

i close my eyes and see her everytime
she is amazing everything about her
the way she makes me feel

everything about her makes me happy
her smile her laugh just the way she talks
i cant stand to see her with someone else
For better or worse i told her how i felt i took the chance
just to find the answer i did'nt want to hear
it was exactly what i feared

any ideas how to make it better rythem word choice anything? plz crit
#2
i think im gonna cut out the last part were it repeats but not to sure any ideas how to make it better