#1
You were five times the man,
but he was ten times the monster.
Come browse what little help i provide.
It dwells in the one place you never searched,
it dwells inside.
I watched a sinkhole swallow the continents,
spit out the ocean
and cough up the monuments.
I didnt run,
I sat in awe and i gazed.
Describe yourself in three words:
a blank page

sit let's have a talk
bleed the pen
grind the chalk
I've got questions regarding such company
sit so we can talk
bleed the pen
grind the chalk
I've got concerns concerning both you and me
We make it up
as we go
along so
we don't know
how it ends
lose or win
it's all just make believe.
Look into my eyes there's nothing to fear
If it's not in the brochure you won't find it here!
Last edited by Segataritendo at Jul 22, 2009,
#2
didnt like the poetry all that much, but you have a very unique style of writing that i did enjoy
#3
Quote by Gods chariot
didnt like the poetry all that much, but you have a very unique style of writing that i did enjoy

I agree the style of writing was unique and very well done. And the actual poetry wasn't all that bad, it just didn't seem to have a point or even a story for that matter. Keep writing though because this is still a good piece of work
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