#1
This is a love song that I wrote in like 5 minutes. I meant to put more innuendos in it but oh well.


Sweet Mary Jane

Whenever I’m feelin down
Mary Jane will be there for me
Whenever I drop my crown
Mary Jane will pick it up for me
She’s the only one for me

She’s the only one
That I’ll ever love
My baby fits me like a glove
We’re one of a kind
Our spirits bind
And unless you were blind
You’d know that I love Mary Jane (Mary Jane)
Yeah I love Mary Jane (Mary Jane)

Oh, Mary
Oh, Mary
Oh, Mary
Oh, sweet Mary Jane

When I saw you
I said I have to have you
Oh, I had to, I had to, I had to (Had to have you)
I’ll never regret that decision
Now I’m in the joy division

She’s the only one
That I’ll ever love
My baby fits me like a glove
We’re one of a kind
Our spirits bind
And unless you were blind
You’d know that I love Mary Jane (Mary Jane)
Yeah I love Mary Jane (Mary Jane)

Yeah I love Mary Jane (Mary Jane)
My baby Mary Jane
My life will never be the same
You are one hot dame
Sweet, sweet, Mary Jane
You numb all of my pain
Without you id go insane
Sweet, Mary Jane
#3
This reminds me of the Velvet Underground in the Loaded era.
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#4
That is the Velvet Underground song, same meaning and same structure...

That is like the time that episode of Still Standing where the guy writes the Kiss song and puts different words to it and doesn't realize it.

You might have heard the Cowboy Junkie version and tried to put it to an upbeat.

The 60s and 70s were a while ago though and grown ups don't smoke enough weed to appreciate this kind of song anymore. Try putting a girls name in and not making the whole the a drug reference.

Glove means condom in Rock songs usually too, try a different rhyme maybe?
#5
damn i dont listen to velvet underground so i didnt know it was already done. And i meant it to be reggae or some other genre
#7
Anybody want to fire one up? LOL

In all seriousness, great lyrics with a great flow. Keep up the good work.