first off cool original title. good guitar playing. i like how it just starts and is right in youre face right away. i wasent exspecting vocals and was happy when they came in. so many songs here dont have them. singing was great. well i wouldent say so much great as orignal tone. reminds me of the black crowes. kinda a wine sounding voice. the lyrics werent real strong and i think kinda held the song back a little. for being almost 5 min long this song went by fast. i was digging it. i realy like youre voice. everything else sounded good to me. keep it up man. not bad at all. i think you can do better then this song though.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20937890#post20937890