#2
Uh, not to sound mean, but I did not understand what that was, I dont know what I was hearing inbetween the mess of computerized noises, i think I heard a clean rythem guitar in there, but I'm not sure. IDK what to say to that, except try and put more guitar in there, or some kinda actual instrument.
#3
There aren't any computerized noises actually.
It's done with only a bass,guitar,drums,and a piano (not a keyboard).

But yeah,it is a mess. :]
Thanks for taking time.
#4
It not THAT bad at all...

I like that sort of effect that you have made with all of the instruments... especially on the drums...

Maybe clear up the recording a bit, but it seems like a good idea.