Uh, not to sound mean, but I did not understand what that was, I dont know what I was hearing inbetween the mess of computerized noises, i think I heard a clean rythem guitar in there, but I'm not sure. IDK what to say to that, except try and put more guitar in there, or some kinda actual instrument.
There aren't any computerized noises actually.
It's done with only a bass,guitar,drums,and a piano (not a keyboard).

But yeah,it is a mess. :]
Thanks for taking time.
It not THAT bad at all...

I like that sort of effect that you have made with all of the instruments... especially on the drums...

Maybe clear up the recording a bit, but it seems like a good idea.