#2
you're tensing your arms and often move your arm rather than your wrist, work on that before trying to play this fast.

"The mind is its own place, and in itself

Can make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n"

- John Milton, Paradise Lost
#3
i was just looking at your black machine, i want to go there.

Edit: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BynUZOJc8QI
Last edited by stephen_rettie at Jul 23, 2009,
#5
It sounds good, just keep working on the song, but if you want the song to have a bit more flow, accent notes, like the first semiquaver of every cluster.