Hey guys....I just posted a demo of mind and I was hoping to get some crits on it. I've got the song somewhat to the point I want....i'm just not sure about the chorus. And the mix is a little rough so once I get this chorus tuned in I'm going to rerecord...but help would be appreciated.....and of course c4C
I like the begining pertty metal sounding, but the chours kinda killed it. I thought it was going to be a scream song the whole way, but I like the clearer voice, trivium and lots of other popular bands do that in parts of their songs, I think it was like an echo or something that made it sound weird. And the chours didnt flow like the rest of the song did. But I think your onto a great idea right now, I would either make the chours a clean voice, just normal singing, or scream the lyrics, and try to make the chours lyrics flow better.