#1
What you've been conferring is now what you're catching
What you thought of this; shattered to pieces
Your understanding broadens as pain engulfs you
And yet you'll never know of the time you burned
You'll never know of all the time that you threw away
Taken from us and tossed into abyss
You'll never know, not now, not ever
Your sadism has worn into us
It was ground as deep as our very soul
Now you see the effects of your insecurities
Insecurities you couldn't ignore; your will is weak and it will weaken more
It will destroy you
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#2
This is probably the best thing I have seen on this forum in a while. Usually I don't bother to comment but this is great. Not much crit to give, just one question, what kind of song are you gonna turn this into?
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#3
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This is probably the best thing I have seen on this forum in a while. Usually I don't bother to comment but this is great. Not much crit to give, just one question, what kind of song are you gonna turn this into?


Let hope its an instrumental.

joking, its actually good, the last few lines become a bit chilche tho
lp345: It's a virus
rage6945: i went on a little bit torrent spree and got Jay-z's black album
nebno6:Maybe it's god punishing you for having a bad music taste.
nowa90:UGNED!!
#4
Thanks to everyone. It's probably going to be a Technical Death Metal
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