#4
That was pretty good.

A little too generic, vocal wise, but that's fine. I have an issue with the guitar sound too, what equipment is he using?
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B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#5
Quote by HowerPower
Lol You R So Brootal

Thank you for contributing

^it's all recorded on a line6 pod, so it's the best he have, we tried getting it as clean as possible, making the riffs audible.. He plays on a Jackson, not sure about the actual model..

Drums could easily be turned up, thanks for the tip
#6
Ah, you guys use Drop A right? I think A POD + Drop A could = the issue
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#7
Quote by HowerPower
Lol You R So Brootal

Shut the **** up.
I think you should invest on a mic, preferably SM57 or a pencil condenser. But it sounds good, drums are a little too low and guitars
#8
Quote by Slaytanic1993
Ah, you guys use Drop A right? I think A POD + Drop A could = the issue

Indeed

We actually tune to Drop B now, but still a problem

The vocals suffer from it as well I think

^if both things are too low, turn the entire thing up
#10
that was really brutal. not the kind of stuff i'm into (aside from Necrophagist and Obscura and a few others i don't listen to much death metal) so i don't really have much to say.

ummmmmm........... cool riffs 'n stuff...
#12
has potential i think you just need to play it cleaner. the low vocals and the low guitars sound off imo. try to use a different style besides growling for the vocals.
#13
I thought it was fairly good, I'd say the vocals could be worked on, they sounded a little bland. I would've added a touch of reverb just to give it some ambiance, but then again, I don't play death metal. I really liked the riff from ~1:15-1:22 thought that was really good. The little bass bits here and there sounded a bit out of place I thought. All in all, I'd say it was very good, and could just use a little polishing.
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#14
sweet sweet song man. first off i love the title. i liked the baby in the begenning allot. it added to it. i was expecting a clever song about birth or something. and was kind of dissapointed when i dident get it. i couldent understand the grunting. if you actualy sang it it would be better. that honestly scared my dog. it has potential. but it needs work.

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