#1
I can almost see you standing
Where you always stood
Share me the weeks news
And that warm smile

As you always would


Breathing again,
don't know how i could
Breathing again
don't know why I should


I can almost see us dancing
Like we used to do
Seeing your soft eyes
And you whisper in my ear

I can no longer hear


Breathing again,
I wish I could
Breathing again
I wish I could


I can almost see you standing
Where you always stood
Share me the weeks news
And that warm smile

As you always would


I'm breathing again,
And I'm breathing again,
Like i've always been,
Yet missing that beautiful thing.


Something a bit personal.
Inb4 any1 calling it utter crap, I don't write often and i'm not experienced.
But hey, you have to start somewhere, right?
Last edited by MindMatters at Jul 23, 2009,
#2
I like it One thing I might suggest is changing the outro just a bit possibly. I don't know how the music flows in your head but in mine when I came to the outro it just didn't seem to flow right. Hope this helps and keep up the good work