#1
this is a post-hardcore song called "Regret" (Parentheses=screams)
I have a very specific way i wanted this to read so i put little play-like "instructions" (i dont know what to call them)


REPEAT AND FADE IN UNTIL COMPLETELY FADED IN
(Regret)

I’m sorry I even met you
I’m sorry I even cared
I’m sorry I even saw you
Sorry I saw you there
Before you were a shining star
And now your just a dot
But I just want to let you know
That you are not
The only one (two, three, four)

I caught your eye
You caught mine
I hope since then
Your eyes haven’t stopped trying
Since that moment I met you
You haven’t stopped lying
You haven’t stopped
(Tying me down, with your lies)
It’s all over (Who are you, to ruin my life)
You stabbed my heart with poisoned knife (It’s all dead)
(Both singers) -I didn’t hear a word that you said

Now
What are you gonna do
Since I discovered you
Since I uncovered you
We
Need to make up
Wipe off this makeup
Cuz I know you hate us
I know you pained us
(Your so contagious)
I’m the one that made us
(If you can guess)
You scared away all our guests
I didn’t even get one caress
Sorry for the mess
(But I couldn’t care less)
About your blessings

BREAKDOWN:
(Its always so hard)
(To say I’m sorry)
(Now I’m scarred)
(Everything’s blurry)
Hurry, hurry
(Before this breakdown ends)
Hurry, hurry
Before our life begins

I’m sorry I even met you
I’m sorry I even cared
I’m sorry I even saw you
Sorry I saw you there
Before you were a shining star
And now your just a dot
But I just want to let you know
That you are not
The only one (two, three, four)
Last edited by benx3000 at Jul 23, 2009,
#2
wow I like this one a lot it relates to me a whole lot haha but that's not the only reason I like it. it flows very well keep up the good work