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Thought I'd give a bit of information on it. I started off meaning to write a love song, but it turned into a story almost. It's quite a straightforward song, but it's hinting at the man in the song having some form of mental problem or something, while the girl is completely smitten.

As they walked
Through the cold
she went on
About growing old
To her, the world
Revolved around them
To her, the world
Revolved around them

In his mind,
Churches burned down
But she didn't
Hear a sound
To her, the world
Revolved around them
To her, the world
Revolved around them

And her life changed
As this love was lost
Her life changed
At such a cost
To her, the world
Revolved around them
To her, the world
Revolved around them

He said to her
"You can't see,
But the world's burning down
in front of me
See perfection,
Watch it die,
Look at beauty,
Open your eyes
The world is not ours
No the world is not ours"

There she stood
Taken aback
This glorious vision
Turned to black
To her, the world
Had stopped turning
To him the world
Was still burning.
Back and sexier than ever

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#2
i really liked this one you not much to say its good
10/10
check my song out its the only 1 i've posted yet