#1
I just uploaded 3 new songs on my profile. I would appreciate some feedback on them. C4C.
#3
lol i could send you tabs if you really want, but thats not really critique
#4
Corperate downfall

Good:

- has almost a live feel its not like soo perfect its just ridiculous. Its not sloppy though.
- some cool harmonies
- overall a good song just not to my taste

Bad:

- Solo could be a little better i suppose
- not really metal, a bit too happy for that. Its more punk than metal. only bad if you're going for a metal vibe

The expiriment:

Good:

- some cool melodies
- good quality
- not generic by any means

Bad:

-rather similar to corperate downfall
-too happy for metal
-more happy punk than metal
- simple, a bit repetitive with vocals though probably fixed

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#6
and in response to my metal being to happy, have you heard of iron maiden?