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The second ever song I wrote for the horror punk band I front: "Six Years Ago". Let me know what you think? We want this to be on our EP we're recording next month so any criticism is greatly appreciated! Keep in mind we're a horror punk band and the music is supposed to be fast and fun, the lyrics aren't completely serious.

Werewolf Fetish

Come take a look at my family.
They’ll tell you everything about me.
They’ll even tell you I’m crazy.
This isn’t the way it was meant to be.

Have you ever taken a walk in the middle of the night?
Have you heard them coming after you?
The howls of the cursed ring throughout the night.
You will hear their snarls as they pounce on you.

One bite is all it takes to lose your soul!
One bite is all it takes to lose control!
You’ll become a monster;
You’ll become a beast.
You’re no longer a man,
You’re something in between.

I spy the full moon high up in the sky.
How can you even comprehend what you see?
One silver bullet might save your skin.
Well too bad, so sad, too late.

One bite is all it takes to lose your soul!
One bite is all it takes to lose control!
You’ll become a monster;
You’ll become a beast.
You’re no longer a man,
You’re something in between.

(guitar solo)

One bite is all it takes to lose your soul!
One bite is all it takes to lose control!
You’ll become a monster;
You’ll become a beast.
You’re no longer a man,
You’re something in between.

You’ll become my monster!
You’ll become my beast!
You’re no longer a man.
But you’re something that I need!
I
HAVE
A
WEREWOLF
FETISH!

Come take a look at my family.
They’ll tell you everything about me.
They’ll even tell you I’m crazy.
This isn’t the way it was meant to be.


This part: 'Come take a look at my family. They’ll tell you everything about me. They’ll even tell you I’m crazy. This isn’t the way it was meant to be.' is meant to be yelled out as a chant by every member of the band with no music in the background. The rest of the song is sung besides the last lines of the last chorus which will be yelled out.

Thanks in advance for any criticism!