#1
got up

made a track

its pretty phat


called commando of the unnecessary

2 versions

one midi cos the others ones a bit inaudible at times

would really like crit for this as i need to keep going with but im not sure where to take it next.

its on my profile!

ta!
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"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

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FAIR ONE
#2
C'mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon ?

C4C!! keep me happy!!

and if anyone wants tabs (which i doubt they will as everyones already an amazing guitarist with skills beyond infinity!!) then just let me know and i'll send them to you
Quote by alexgepgepgep
like getting punched in the face with awesome



Quote by diler1089
"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

its badass.


FAIR ONE
#3
hey man. that was okay. i listend to the midi. it would sounds loads better with guitars/drums and whatnot. its not bad, but its not realy good eather, its just there. as far as where to go next just change it up with a diff rythem kinda thing or a key change, some kind og change up. to much more of that and it would start to wear the listener i think. keep it up though man, this could be a great song by the time its all done. it just needs allot of work.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20937890#post20937890