#1
crit4crit

It's called taste tape over your mouth, idk if that's the actual lyric but that's what I call it. It a little off in parts, but nothing that's horrible, it was really hard making the song then trying to FORCE the vocals to fitXD
I'm cleaning it up, practically redoing the vocals, but what i have up will give a general idea of what it'll sound like, also feedback while i'm working on it's what i want.
Oh and FYI i don't care for paramore...at all.


edit:
it's on my profile.
Last edited by stratkat at Jul 26, 2009,
#4
The into was cool, had me listening and when the chorus came in I was expecting something huge, but it didn't and I lost some interest.

Overall it's cool what you did man, but change it up a bit and stuff if you know what I mean.
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