#2
the intro was great! the outro was great! however as is, without a solo or vocals i think the middle was a bit repetitive. maybe a brighter chorus (somethin like prayer by disturbed) but thats just imo. Once everythings put together, solo and vocals, we're lookin at something big. could you check out my original https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1168548 thanx and nice listenin to ya
#3
Quote by Stevienuts
the intro was great! the outro was great! however as is, without a solo or vocals i think the middle was a bit repetitive. maybe a brighter chorus (somethin like prayer by disturbed) but thats just imo. Once everythings put together, solo and vocals, we're lookin at something big. could you check out my original https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1168548 thanx and nice listenin to ya


Thanks for the crit man. My brother said he'll write lyrics for it (hopefully he does), but then I have the task of finding a vocalist who can record clearly. >.<
#4
Thats freaken evil man, I love it. The guitar tone sorta reminded me of disturbed or some other band I cant put my hand on at the moment. The only problem I thought there was with the song was the drums were too loud and the guitar was not loud enough. And during you interlude/solo, the dum dum beat got kinda boring, mabey something more interesting with the bass drum would make it more evil.

Good job, cant wait for the lyrics.