i'm going to be honest and say that was pretty rough. your recording isn't very good which detracts from the performance. the song itself is kind of generic. this is not to say it sucked but it had nothing that stands out. you need to work on your timing but with no drums that can be tough. work your leads out better so they flow naturally and in time with your rhythm track. you have potential so just iron out the kinks and get a better recording together. i'm prettty sure that you'll get better reviews with a little more effort.

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