#1
Ok so a little while ago I posted a song called "Containment", but it was only in MIDI form. So here is the whole thing, recorded with real guitars. There are a few errors in and there in the solo and probably a few in the rhythm. But, it's my first complete song, and the first time I've written a solo so it might not be amazingly complex.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Defnition/music/all/play665844

In my profile, linked, called "Containment [Final 1]"


Any critique is welcome and encouraged, and as the title says I'll critique your work as well if you ask.
#5
solid riffing and nice lead tone. yeah the leads themselves could be better but weren't bad at all. perhaps a single note riff or two to break up the power chords would improve it a little. overall a good effort.

my stuff is in my profile.