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Hi,
This is my first contribution to this part of the forum, I decided to post this since it's very different from my usual writting style (it's very straight up), so I would like to know what people tought about it. Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read this, and please let me know what you think.

Dying of Old Age


These streets are plagued with wooden tongues
And fully programmed answers for even the simplest of questions
We live our lives constantly eager for another cheap thrill
Call it excitement, call it what you will, but for me, redundant will suffice
Our narrowing perspectives and brief attention span are a gift
Embrace it with every single thing you've got
Years of walking hasn't brought forth enough to fill a page
So what now, does that mean I should start pacing?

We're all way too comfortable in our ways
To even be bothered to shop for change
And our screens now glorify everyday banality
Make it seem like the sky is in our grasp
While we're all simply reaching for the floor
We believe ourselves, hell, we elaborate on our flawed views
We're all just products of our surroundings
But at least I ****ing know it

Maybe this explains why I feel like a mjillion bucks
When I've got a slanted posture and a slurred speech
Only then can I distance myself from using sentences I've rehearsed
The ones that were flipped too many times, until I finally found them neat

This is all so interesting
Scream it until you believe it
We're all just dying of old age
What an interesting conclusion
Yet we're all convinced
Our lives are worth media attention
Nothing's shocking it's kind of frustrating
Never seen anything so biased and disconnected
We're bathing in the pinacle of thousands of years
Of imposed toughts, of imposed actions

We're all as average as it gets
Yet it's so easy to forget
Don't make yourself seem larger than life
You'll simply die of old age
Not the grandiose scenario
That's been played back in your head
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...i dont get it... it was hard to read all they way threw it didnt keep my intrest much but i still read the whole thing lol i like it i jus dont get it much.
Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!