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awaiting in deafning silence
what you posses, that laughter
the destructive unbloody violence Verse I
ending in a tremendous disaster

applying force on an open wound
just let the blood drip to the ground
there's nothing for you to take anymore Chorus
just leave me shackled on the floor

awaiting in blinding darkness
what you posses, that fortress Verse II
the mindcaging, burning chains
enslaving my body through my brains

it's ridiculous
you're obsessed
with a thing Break
that just forgets

it's tearing out the inside
with the bloody, rusted knife
still left in chain suspension Break II
stings of pain furthering the torture

awaiting in deafning silence
what you posses, that laughter
the destructive unbloody violence Verse III
ending in a tremendous disaster

applying force on an open wound
just let the blood drip to the ground
there's nothing for you to take anymore Chorus
just leave me shackled on the floor

what's done, is done, no way back
no way to run, no turning back
it'll keep the beating, going faster Ending
awaiting the tremendous disaster


I'm kind of new to writing lyrics, maybe half a year. I'm really glad for any advice you can give me, I'm open to anything!
Tell me if you like it (what you like about it) and if not, where i can improve on my writing! Thanks in advance
Last edited by mmkat at Jul 26, 2009,