#1
Any changes or improvements i could do? Is the main idea even worth turning into a song? Cheers.

Sun fades to black
it has its reason to turn its back (on you)
Now you run from the spawn that hunts
it hunts only you

Feel my breath on your back
I see your soul, Its black
Tainted with the the blood
To cleanse you from sin

Night runs by slow
No mercy to show
No hindsight for the blind

Spawn the wicked from your hell
death will come, time will tell
Thy sins will not be forgiven
By demons be driven

Feel my breath on your back
I see your soul, Its black
Tainted with the the blood
To cleanse you from sin

Night runs by slow
No mercy to show
No hindsight for the blind
#3
My biggest criticism is it lacks meaning. But it's certainly a good starting point.
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#4
Quote by DoomsdayArsenal
My biggest criticism is it lacks meaning. But it's certainly a good starting point.


Hence thrash.
Soon, death metal's drums will be so fast only computers will be able to listen to it.

94? Not bad. It shall improve >=)

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