#1
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Guitar - Jackson DXMG Dinky
Amp - Amplitube Metal (Plugin)
Software - Sonoma Riffworks T4

Critiques are appreciated
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#2
your song is kind of a mixed bag as far as quality. most of the heavy riffs sounded good and were well played. the clean breaks didn't work very well and were often a little sloppy playing wise. the sound at the beginning is really grating and i almost turned off the song because i really hated that. some of your lead tones were a little to odd for my tastes as well. some editing would help the song it ges on to long without really going anywhere. perhaps a rework that is a little more cohesive would result in an excellent song. i didn't really hear any bass so i assume you did put any in. my stuff is in my profile.
#4
I have to go with what the others said except, I knoticed that your guitar was slightly out of tune, I think it was the b and g that was off, and you need to work on your bar chords, a few of the strings got muted, but dont worry about that, happens to me sometimes. Good work though, its good composing just needs some work.
#5
Get rid of that whistle thing or whatever is going on in the beginning. Make your transitions into the clean better. I see what you're trying to do, and you're almost there, just needs some polish.

Agreed on the hard riffs being badass. Also I like the solo, but not the little run from like 3:42-3:47

It reminds me of a Metallica song, which is not a bad thing considering theyre my all time favorite band :]

This song has good potential but isn't quite there yet.


c4c?

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