#1
Something I put together awhile back.

Real simple. Kinda downy feel to it.

What do you guys think of the solo? I wanted it to be sorta light but still have that depressing feel at the same time.

EDIT: Updated it.

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#2
Rather bland, in my opinion. And I don't think the lead guitar harmonized very well with the rhythm in the chorus. Not the way I was hearing it, anyway. Maybe you have a different ear for it or something, but it definitely sounded off to me.
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#3
It's supposed to sorta bland.

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#4
Yeah, definitely a little bland, but by no means bad either. I think this is the type of song that you could just kick back and relax to without thinking about it too hard. People always seem to think that's a bad thing, it's really not.

The chorus.
I'm not sure what you were thinking, but well... it's hideous. Your rhythm and piano are playing Ab Gm Fm. Your lead is playing Eb, F, Gm... That's just...just don't do it... please. As much fun as chord substitution is, picking the right chords are rather essential.

The solo.

Good melody for the most part, but the complete lack of nuance (vibrato, slides, grace notes) makes it lack any real power or feeling. I can't say I'm all that fond of that Dm/b5 chord in there either. I wouldn't say it's bad or anything, and you picked a good way to voice it, but I just didn't like it.
#6
Sorta fixed it up a bit.


Well maybe not just a bit.

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#7
I don't have much to comment on this song, besides I think the solo would do well with some delay.
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