#1
it would be great if anyone listended to my first song ever made... tell me what you think.. just go to my profile, thanks!
#3
cool riffs.

cant really say much more. if you can program some drums and layer more guitars on top of each other then you'll have a much better song. this just sounds like you recording yourself playing guitar...wouldn't really consider it a "song"
#4
i have a drum set, and i porbably add more layers tomorow.. i was just to lazy to the rest today... cuz i started to work on more songs
#5
First of all I'm going to tell you to turn up your mids, even if its just a little bit, I cant stress how important mids are to your tone. Mids lets your sound be heard, instead of thin and unheard.

Anyway, I though the progression was awesome, very well planned out, but boring, and slow, I would add another guitar in there to play like a lead harmonizer to spice things up a bit. And some drums to make it more interseting. The clean to distorted guitar was a bit rough, but I'm sure you can fix that rather quick. And it needs to be turned up in the mix, it was a very quiet song. Good job though, ,keep em comeing.