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This is my second song I've posted. I envision this as a Pink Floyd/System of a Down (sounding) kinda...musical journey. Where it doesn't exactly sound great all the way through, the it's not so much the music as the visualization and the experience you get from listening to it.
It's about a thoughtless society just going with the flow, nobody being independent, doing what they're told.
The first 2 are from the mob as a whole.
The 3rd is from "the individual".
The 4th and 5th are from the work leaders.
And then the rest is the mob.
I wrote it in about 15 minutes, kinda a rough idea around a really cool riff I came up with. I'd love it if you wanna judge it, re write parts, or even write your own parts? It's definitely not done.

Planning
Gathering
Building
Doing our jobs

Thoughtless
Fragile
Hopeless
Doing our jobs

What is this
Where am I
I don't want to
Keep doing this job

Get back
Stay put
Stay calm
Keep doing your job

No thinking
No speaking
Keep working
Stay one with the mob

This is the revelation
The flooding of the walls
Now comes the realization
Monotony falls

We'll break down the gates
We'll picket in the street
We'll burn all the factories
Standing on our own two feet

We'll be independent
We'll think on our own
It's time for the leaders
To be overthrown
I'm an extreme supporter of the Second Amendment

It's a man's obligation to stick his boneration in a women's separation; this sort of penetration will increase the population of the younger generation.