#2
hey man. it was short, and kind of reminded me of a rap thing. not bad, but nothing real original. it just sounds like something you came up with one afternoon. i liked at 33 seconds when just the keyboard piano thing was playing. cool little breakdown. not bad man. i'd like to hear something more advanced though.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1171302