#2
wierd song!

Favorite part starts at bar 84!! and it ends at 103, nice melody here
i didnt really like the intro :|
the augmented chords are cool, i like!
i did not like bar 34 35, it kill the mood in my opinion, i think the transition here should be more smooth

donno what else to say!!!
maybe try to orginise into verses, chorus....

crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1159337