I agree, you've really got to work on your tone.
But I can't complain with you wanting to post up a vid and see what the guitarist community here has to say about ur playing!

Your pinch harmonics were surprisingly good. I suggest you work on your tone a little bit more and you'll be good to go.
C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1172587

I'll check this out, then post in the edit.

Really good!

Tone needs a bit of work, make sure if you're recording into your computer directly, use cabinet simulation.

Pinches were good, but just seemed a little bit off pitch.

Bends were good, on pitch for the most part.

I would suggest taking your hand off before you slide, you left your hand on one time and kind of scraped over the strings.

I would also open up your picking hand, I feel that an open hand gives me more control over the pick.

Overall great cover, few mistakes, but nothing horrible!
Last edited by TheBigProjekt at Jul 30, 2009,