Thanks y'all. I made some errors and completely to play part of the song but I think im gonna add a solo and more stuff to it to make it nicer. I usually write pop-punk so this is quite a change and i wanted some feedback
I like it, kind of reminds me of August Burns red although a bit less chaotic, which is a good thing to me.
august burns red? haha thats cool
I kinda thought it sounded more like bring me the horizon to me but ABR is even better.
haha yes!!!!! metal strat!!=) \m/

this is pretty heavy tho so you have some good effects ,shame about the sound tho it was hard to pick out the parts. you doing a proper one soon?
i wish i had more to say other than bring on the finished product.
if you have time to crit any of mine that would be cool.