#2
Pretty cool, I'm not a huge fan of country but that song was pretty good, kind of folky which I like.

Keep it up!
#3
thanks for the crit
sorry but i can't listen to all of your song i'm on a 56k connection, for some reason or another we can't get broadband and it would take up about a hour just to listen to it and thats on low-fi
i'm not a great fan of country and i don't know the structure either but i can say that your acoustic guitar has a nice tone might want to be slightly louder
i listenened up to 1:40 and it doesn't seem too bad its kinda repetitive but i really can't say whether that's just your song or most of country music

otherwise your actual playing and singing sounded spot on
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#4
I like the short 'lick' in the intro, although short it does provide a good start to the song. I like how you've introduced it at the end of the piece too.
As usual, your voice really suits the rest of the piece (i remember it from your other song!) - it really is quite outstanding!
Haha, i like the 'i played my fender until my fingers bled' line.
It is quite obvioius where the chorus is, and that's a good thing... but perhaps add some strings or bass, or maybe even a small backbeat just to emphasise on it more.

Thx for the crit, and keep it up!
AJ
#5
Thats pertty freaken good, cant get any better than a song about a guitar. It seems like you mixed it pertty well, the guitar was just loud enough but didnt overpower your voice. I like the bruskey line, made me lol. Your a great songwriter, cant wait to see what else you come up with.

Can you crit another song from me? I just figured out how to layer guitars and stuff, and its my first attempt at it, but its called Army of One in my profile. Its an alternitive rock style.
#6
Sounded good man, you got a pretty good voice and I like the country folk feel a lot. You should try and overlay that little solo type thing that you have with your normal progression, just a suggestion. You definitely got some talent, keep it up man.
#7
Not really a big country fan, except for older country like Johnny Cash and the likes, but I liked this a lot, especially the fact that you weren't singing about beer, girlfriends, or your truck

I thought your voice could've had more energy and more dynamic changes... It seemed you were kind of singing the same volume the whole time. I thought it would be a good idea if you gradually got louder when you sang the "...I picked up, I picked up the six-string" part. And if you could find other spots you where could add some dynamics, that would be a good idea. Otherwise, pretty good.
#9
I liked the sound your vocals had, it seemed like there was some delay in there, but they really had a presence to them. I think as a guitarist this is an easy song to enjoy, because we can all relate to it in some way. The chorus seemed catchy, which I find to be one of the harder parts of song writing, so i can really commend the peace on that. On the negative side it started out a little odd, I'm not sure what it was, but i almost didn't make it to the first chorus, once i did i enjoyed it and listened to the song twice, but it started very slow, and was touch and go there for a minute, so you might want to play around with the lyrics at the front. Actually on a third listen its not the lyrics themselves, maybe the singing needs to be more dynamic, i'm not sure.
#10
I really like the six string song. Great songwriting, really chill song in general with great vibes. The vocals are pretty good. The guitars have a really great sound to em. The only crit I have is to just mess with the EQ a little bit, I think it'd sound fuller with a tad bit more lows in the full track. Otherwise, well done
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