Nice your playing is very solid throughout the song and it sounds like you know it well.

But you really should invest into a new mic, I don't know any recommendations because I use a rock band mic to record, since I'm cheap xD. A new camera would be nice to have too for better quality videos. But mic first, since sound is most important for covers.

crit mine ?
nice cover man , i cant really pick out anything bad
and to the guy above i also use a rockband mic to record cuz i am also cheap