#1
Psychophobia

Can't get rid of the thoughts in my head,
Feeling of lonley, I'd be better off dead.
When there's no one around, and nothing to do.
I try to ignore it, pretend it's not true.

But the real proof is,
There is no denying,
Tell yourself the truth,
But it feels like your lying,
I can't take anymore,
It feels like I'm dying,
I really wanna live,
I just don't see the point in trying.

I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.

Feel like I'm getting crazier, Everyday,
The feelings get stronger, they won't go away.
My sanity sits on the brink of destruction,
I feel it coming on, I feel the eruption.

But the real proof is,
There is no denying,
Tell yourself the truth,
But it feels like your lying,
I can't take anymore,
It feels like I'm dying,
I really wanna live,
I just don't see the point in trying

I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.

Went and bought a rope, to end this depression.
But in doing that, I learned a lesson.
I hung it up by my ceiling fan,
I knew this would work, I had it all planned.

But the honest truth is,
There is no denying,
Fan blades are weak,
Don't even bother trying,
Hard you will fall,
It sucks I aint lying,
When on top of you,
That Ceiling fan is lying.

I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.
I think this time I'll do it,
Can't bring myself to it.

I wish that these thoughts would just go away,
I want it to end I can't take the pain.
I just feel like I don't wanna be alive,
I think I found the answer, a Colt .45

I want it to end,
Don't want nobody crying,
So in this weapon,
My death I am buying.
Put the gun to my chin,
Pull the trigger I am trying,
I hear that sound,
And feel the pleasure of dying.

I will admit it,
I can't believe that I did it.
I will admit it,
I can't believe that I did it.
I will admit it,
I can't believe that I did it.

We all die in the end anyways, right?

Whaddaya think?
#2
I think it sucks. Its blunt, straight forward, unoriginal, depressing and pointless. That's what I think.
#4
those repeative parts are too numerous, yep youre laying and dying much.
well its my opinion
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