#1
I feel the blitz fluent in my limbs,
I hear the dispatch of the 911,
I taste the briquette impelled down my throat,
But I'm ok i think i just overdosed,

Chorus
Once again heroin killed the heroin,
once again heroin killed the heroin,
its just a circle game,
an overdose of to much fame,

You leave a legacy but at the same time,
You leave a legacy that generations will persue behind,
to many and me you were a guidepost,
to bad you had to go and overdose

Chorus
Once again heroin killed the heroin,
once again heroin killed the heroin,
its just a circle game,
an overdose of to much fame,

(Melodic Guitar Solo)

Chorus
Once again heroin killed the heroin,
once again heroin killed the heroin,
its just a circle game,
an overdose of to much fame,

Chorus
Once again heroin killed the heroin,
once again heroin killed the heroin,
its just a circle game,
an overdose of to much fame,

(Slow Faded Ending With Soft Melodic Guitar Solo(
Quote by Strings?!

I quote myself.
#2
Hmmm. Nice lyrics dude. I like the chorus especially the last line. One thing though, maybe you should add some more lines to the verses. Also, what kind of music would you use? Something like Sixx:A.M.? cuz this reminds me of Sixx:A.M. for some reason.
#4
First - no bumps.

Second, I thought that the first three lines are definitely good, which led me to comment on this. But after that, it's like you got bored and chose to simply write what the reader would expect. No vivid language. No interesting ideas. But at least you got part of it right.