#1
I have officially finished my first full track, and I am really proud of myself at the moment, I personally think it sounds great. Swift Currents is the title, Rockin track with some groovy sections. I'm playing bass, guitar, synth, and the drums are pre-programmed by me.

I just want to share with you my first piece of music, and hope you enjoy listening to it as much as I did making it! I also appreciate any feedback and criticisms!!


http://www.soundclick.com/vellosounds
#2
Intro is nice. Sents a good groove and nice feel. However, this feels kinda Hollow. Perhaps more reverb? I like the lick around the 1 minute mark. The drums are also really cool there and blend it really well. 1:47 was not good though. It jumped to a different theme and had no transition. I like the new theme, but it was such an akward jump it messed with the flow of the song. They keys at 2:48 were a kinda dissonant against the guitar and bass parts. I don't know if that's intentional, but for ambient music, you should steer clear of dissonance.

Overall a good song. Im sure better equipment would also vastly improve this, so I'll still give it 8/10.

Mind taking a listen to my newest song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1173313
PM me for newts
#3
Thanks I really appreciate the feedback! I know I still have a lot to learn, and will keep practicing and keep what you said in mind.