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It's been 17 days since the two of us talked
One suitcase packed and then you walked
So much left to do, So much left to say
Crescendo footsteps come take my blues away
And now I just want you to know

That when you're with me I feel like I'm someone
Someone who knows where they belong
Please don't ever leave, don't ever go
Stay with me, Suburban Soul

Take a backseat now for once in your life
See the back of me, take out her knife
See why I cannot do everything you say
This cracked heart can break easily
And now I want you to know

That when you're with me I feel like I'm someone
Someone who knows where they belong
Please don't ever leave, don't ever go
Stay with me, Suburban Soul
That when you're with me I feel like I'm someone
Someone who knows where they belong
Please don't ever leave, don't ever go
Stay with me, Suburban Soul
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#2
I really love it. I wouldn't change a thing. But adding a bridge would help complete the story, you got your feelings out thus far!