#1
You've got the looks, and you've got the lips
How could tonight get any better than this
If we can't hold hands, we are too far apart
I know that it is straight from the heart

The sweetest smile with a heart of gold
Being with you will never grow old
I love you more than you will ever know
You are my one, and only beau

You've got the looks, and you've got the lips
How could tonight get any better than this
If we can't hold hands, we are too far apart
I know that it is straight from the heart

Grateful for everyday I'm alive,
Without you, I don't know how I'd survive
Where were you hiding my whole life
All I know is that I love, my beautiful wife

You've got the looks, and you've got the lips
How could tonight get any better than this
If we can't hold hands, we are too far apart
I know that it is straight from the heart

Critique?
#2
"You are my one, and only beau"

That sounds like a forced rhyme.
Plus, I just personally hate that word (nothing personal to you).

"Where were you hiding my whole life
All I know is that I love, my beautiful wife"

Too cheesy.
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This thread is officially about sucking Sleaze off for a sig.


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Hey Sleaze I'll give you a blowjob if you sig me. Maybe even some nudey photos?


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Sleaze, that made me lulz in my pants.


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hahaha Sleaze i'd give you my mom for that one.
#3
Quote by Sleaze Disease
"You are my one, and only beau"

That sounds like a forced rhyme.
Plus, I just personally hate that word (nothing personal to you).

"Where were you hiding my whole life
All I know is that I love, my beautiful wife"

Too cheesy.

I meant the french definition of beau, and probably too cheesy your right :P i wrote it at 3 in the morning editing will most likely occur lol
#4
Quote by Cockpuncher 2.0
I meant the french definition of beau

Haha yeah, I know, I had an ex that would call me that.
Quote by SteveHouse
This thread is officially about sucking Sleaze off for a sig.


Quote by tayroar
Hey Sleaze I'll give you a blowjob if you sig me. Maybe even some nudey photos?


Quote by crazy8rgood


Sleaze, that made me lulz in my pants.


Quote by 36mikeyb36
hahaha Sleaze i'd give you my mom for that one.
#5
Quote by Sleaze Disease
Haha yeah, I know, I had an ex that would call me that.

That would be why! Damn exes, ruining the fun in everything -_-