#2
very very very well written song. i was really worried when i saw "Country" as the genre but I like the song a lot. lyrics are well written and the music is well written too. everything flows well i guess is what i'm trying to say.

good work!
"... and on either side of the river was the tree of life, with its twelve kinds of fruit, yielding its fruit each month. The leaves of this tree were for the healing of nations.
#3
Beautiful song. Very nice singing too, certainly helped make the song an very enjoyable listen. Maybe, though, you could try experimenting with some vocal harmonies? Just a thought, I don't know if it would work.
#4
^ +1 for vocal harmonies
"... and on either side of the river was the tree of life, with its twelve kinds of fruit, yielding its fruit each month. The leaves of this tree were for the healing of nations.
#5
NICE. its a very good song your singing is good the guitar sounds clean. the lyrics and guitar part go very well together. keep up the good work.
tyhanks for the crit