#1
genre: electronic

(Verse 1)
On second thought
I dunno what I’ve been told
Now that you’re gone
Sometimes I wonder what I could’ve done

I’ll never be the same
Feels like everything I touch turns to stone

(Chorus)
You leave me breathless all the time
You’re a big person in my eyes
Sometimes I feel so little compared
Just remember there’s someone who cares
Wherever life paves your way
You’ll always be the light to my days

(Verse 2)
So I’ll sit here casting the shadow
That will guide your wings near
Because when the twilight fades
The darkness collects everything I hold dear

Oh its such a hurt to know you’re gone
I’ll never be the same
Feels like everything I touch turns to stone

(Chorus)
You leave me breathless all the time
You’re a big person in my eyes
Sometimes I feel so little compared
Just remember there’s someone who cares
Wherever life paves your way
You’ll always be the light to my days

(Bridge)
Oh its such a hurt to know you’re gone
I’ll never be the same
Sometimes I wonder what I could’ve done
Feels like everything I touch turns to stone

(Chorus)
You leave me breathless all the time
You’re a big person in my eyes
Sometimes I feel so little compared
Just remember there’s someone who cares
Wherever life paves your way
You’ll always be the light to my days
#2
The rhymes in the chorus feel so forced to me, but its one of the most emotional parts. I'd try to make the chorus flow better and choose words that convey more emotion. I'd flip the second and third lines in the chorus because it'd make more sense, but that's just my opinion.
The second verse is my favorite part. It has great imagery and emotionality. I'd try to add that imagery to the rest of the piece and it'd be even better.
I hope this helped. Feel free to send me a pm