I admit at first the vocals kind of rub me the wrong way. I mean it sounds a bit like you are emulating someone else. However, as the song goes by you sound a bit more comfortable and I like it more. I am a fan of vocal harmony but very song can't have this... I like the lyrics, personally and I definitely did not hate this track. There is a genuine quality of emotion in there. If you would take the time to check out my track "Hold A Moment" , I would appreciate it. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/search.php?searchid=386575 Thanks!!
yeah it's a really awkward note to hit for me, and i felt weird singing it. i think i'm going to redo it before releasing it.

anyone in particular i sounded like i was emulating, i felt like i was emulating musical singers lol

thanks for all of the good words and stuff. i'll check your stuff out in a second.