Turn your guitar down. Your tone may be out of your control, but you can fix the ridiculous volume.

0:58 was the first part that sounded original. The other riffs sound pretty common.
The solo at 1:32 was pretty sweet. I like the effect on top of it too. And the sound effects add to it a lot.
The outro was pretty sloppy too...

Sorry for sounding harsh.

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