#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IHuNIBO76cU

Watch it. Crit it.

It's not the best, but it is one hard song to play xD.

I played the lower rhythm in the main riff, I forgot the pick slide before the verse, and ofcourse it's not extremely clean in the pre-chorus, but I'm also not god. Finally, I forgot to fade out the end, so :/

I've only been playing for about 5-6 months, so don't be too hard on me :P

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#4
No offense but that was pretty poor tbh. Lots of things were played wrongly and out of time :S. But with practice you'll get it.
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#5
You miss alot of the chugs on the main riff. the mini riff in the pre chorus should be tighter, add abit more palm mute...keep working on it man, lot of work needed.
#6
That wasn't bad. I haven't heard the original song, but this cover was quite good. And for only 5-6 months, this is good. Keep working on it. The only thing I really have to say I guess is just work a bit more on timing and palm muting. But really, this was quite good, just keep practicing as much as you can and you'll keep getting better.

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