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Washed Away (In A Sea Of Hopeless Faces)

When you left home
The seas were gentle
When you set sail
The winds were calm
You've set your course
There's no turning back
Nowhere else to flee

The tides have changed
The seas are churning
Waiting to swallow you alive
Lost in a sea of broken dreams
Formed by tears of desperation
You never though it would come to this
Never though this day would come

You set out to lead the way
But now you're slowly drifting off course
Fading away from everything you've ever wanted to become

Abandon ship or drown in a sea of hopeless faces
Trapped by what they thought would save them
You never though it would come to this
Never though this day would come

But here it is
Make your choice
Its your decision
Follow or be followed
Sink or swim
<--- Craig: Guy With Best Username Ever
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lulz, best name ever.

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TS, your username is really difficult to type, so I'm just going to refer to you as Craig from now on. Okay? Okay.
#2
This doesn't stand alone very well IMO opinion because of the metaphor is so direct, but with music behind it I think it would turn out very well.

That aside, you use a lot of nice imagery that conveys much emotion. The flow was nice too. Overall, the writing was good, but the metaphor was a bit too cliche for me. Good job though
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^^^ thanks. its for a song im working on. hopefully ill be able to record soon.
<--- Craig: Guy With Best Username Ever
Quote by Primus2112
\m/[-_-]\m/

lulz, best name ever.

Quote by herby190
TS, your username is really difficult to type, so I'm just going to refer to you as Craig from now on. Okay? Okay.