#1
This is the first ever song i have ever written. Im not quite done with it yet, i probably need to throw in another verse. But ya, this is the jist of it. It is a very instrumental song, and the intro starts out with a kind of upbeat finger picking with a few accents, in the D A C G type format. So yes, please Comment with suggestions and Such!

Back in The Day

Verse 1

pretty little girl with her milk chocolate eyes doesn't know her own disguise

she can't make up her mind on to waste her time on him but you know

they're always off and on again

Chorus

and everytime he went to meet her his whole body would start to shiver

she would look into his eyes and whisper, its ok and thats how it was, back in the

day
We can dance if we want to
We can leave your friends behind
'Cause your friends don't dance and if they don't dance
Well they're no friends of mine
Last edited by Tojo62 at Aug 5, 2009,
#3
Yeah you should probly add another verse or two. This looks like the beginning of a good song, it just needs the middle and end.
#4
Quote by MyCurse08
Yeah you should probly add another verse or two. This looks like the beginning of a good song, it just needs the middle and end.

ya, i just started it last nite, so the rest of it should be coming soon.
We can dance if we want to
We can leave your friends behind
'Cause your friends don't dance and if they don't dance
Well they're no friends of mine