#1
Hail to the worms
Death to the surface dwellers
Hail to the worms
Swimming in the dirt

Hail to the worms
Death to the sun worshipers
Pray for the worms
Dying on the surface

She says she worries about me
But ill be fine
the worms have found us here
at the end of the line
The sky is red, the sun is black
this much i know
she follows me still
but the worms will swallow us whole

Hail to the worms
Death to the surface dwellers
Hail to the worms
Swimming in the dirt

Hail to the worms
Death to the sun worshipers
Pray for the worms
Dying on the surface


[Short, Simple, I dont give a ****]
Last edited by DoZo is Dead at Aug 6, 2009,
#5
sounds pretty good, name a bit silly but gets good would work well with a little black metal screeching
'into the night under a crimson sky on the the fetid wings of death we ride' Messiah Of Hate by Hell Wave
#7
I like it. Definitely would sound good as a metal-ish sort of song. The one problem I have how you rhyme "fine" with "line" in the third stanza. Neither line is really doing anything, and it sounds extremely forced. I'd suggest changing those two lines to something that would contribute to the piece as a whole a bit more. Other than that, though, it's great.
kill all humans