#1
Recently I have been writing songs that do not flow sonically, like to many or to few syllables. Also I have gotten into this bad habit of trying to rhyme every line like either ABAB or AABB. Can someone give me some advice?
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#2
write how you feel. work on things... put more thought into them maybe?
dont try so hard to make things rhyme... just try to make it flow,
and make sure you say what you want.


also,
please read the rules.


sorry, but *reported*
cause i thought i'd give a little advice before doing it,
rather than being a complete doucher like everyone else is when they report these... =/
Last edited by TonyRandall at Aug 6, 2009,