#1
Really have to apologise for this one before i start but i've got to post it.
A line came into me head 'I froze my bollocks in the snow' so i thought to myself gotta be a chorus line,punch line so to speak so i wrote the chorus and then the first verse,after which i thought it's gotta start with the chorus and so on and so forth,well i finished the lyrics and thought 'music know' and to my horror i started tapping 4 beats to a second and realised it only seams to work with a YEEHA first and iv'e just written a line dancing toe tapping,brain wasting country song.
Please tell me it's possible to sing it a different way but it's so stuck in my head.
Read on if you dare

YEEHAH(OOPS THAT SLIPPED OUT)
chorus
You know i wasted so much time
In this feeling that your mine
The night that you kicked off
I finally got to know
That i just had to go
As i froze my bollocks in the snow

verse
Well she looked so hot
As we were setting off
Dressed up from top to her pins
Black leather boots
And dyed to the roots
Face framed with D&G bins

All was going fine
Until about nine
When happy hour quickly flipped in
I tried to slow you down
Saw those swollen eyes frown
I knew that i just couldn't win

chorus
You know i blew out so much time
When i thought that you were mine
The night that you kicked off
And when i got to know
That i just had to go
As i froze my bollocks in the snow

I wandered the night
With nothing going right
Plugging through the cold for your sins
Checking all the tarts
Among the broken hearts
For your face framed with D&G bins

Then i caught your eye
at the bar with a guy
And i knew that i wasn't gonna win
Head spinning round
As your swollen eyes frown
It was time for me to give in

You know it took me all that time
To learn that your not mine
That night that you kicked off
I finally got to know
That you just had to go
As i froze my bollocks in the snow
Well i finally got to know
You really had to go
As i froze my bolocks in the snow

YEEHAH(see it slipped in again)

Look i really do apologise again but do you think this could be terminal square dancing disease and will i ever be able to write something deep and meaningfull again or is this it forever,a life of WHOOPING and HOLLARING and tucking my thumbs in the waistband of my too tight jeans.
#2
Haha! I wouldn't worry to much man. As for the song. It all rests on how the music sounds and how it's sung.
#3
Hyah back(see it's getting worse)Iv'e never been able to put music to words but my toes tapping and i can feel my strumming hand starting to follow i think it might be terminal.