#2
great stuff. i was surprised. reminded me of peacefull laid back surfing music. good playing and chords. vocals were different, but good. allot of emotion. the lyrics were hard to hear though. it it gets a bit repeditive, i think around 120 mark it could use an uplifting chorus or something. nice music to just melt to. great job. i like the cetchy horn type thing at the 2 min mark. what is that?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1178270
#3
Thanks Man thanks...yeah im working on the vocals...I usally write my lyrics after I create my melody/basic songs..Im glad you liked it..theres much more to come but I just thought Id see what people think about my little demos