#1
Hey All,

Just made this. I think it captures the mood quite nicely.

Its only 1min 30 secs long so have a listen please and let me know what you think.

C4C as usual.
Attachments:
Evening Sunshine.gp4
Evening Sunshine.gp5
Evening Sunshine.mid
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Last edited by Qazo at Aug 7, 2009,
#2
I really liked it. Some nice riffs in there.
The only suggestion I have for you is to maybe rally the ending to give it more of a coming to an end feeling.
#3
that piece felt very relaxing...i enjoyed it alot....i could listen to it over an over..the solo was very good...i especially liked the bend on bar 11 for some reason...i think it would sound 10 times better with drums and bass, but it was very good...id give it a 7/10....

C4C? If you have the time, its song 7 in my sig
#4
Thanks guys ... dalcow i'll crit your song ASAP

I know what you mean about the drums and bass - i just couldnt seem come up with something i liked - if anyone fancies writing a bass or drum track feel free but make sure you let me know so I can hear it too!
Quote by philjay
*Picks up TT like handbag and smacks you over the head like an angry granny *
Try that with your rocker 30


Latest Songs & Poems

[thread="1404112"] Blaze (Music)[/thread]
[thread="1207211"] Evening Sunshine (Music)[/thread]
[thread="899566"] To Wonder (Music)[/thread]
[thread="960046"]Dreams[/thread]