#2
i listend to friday rain. i wasent exspecting much, but this was great. very cetchy beat. also nice use of chords. it was begging for lyrics though. otherwise it feels kind of empty and leaves you hanging. that mean beat also get a little old, its great but you can only take so much. its not my style but it seems like it needs something else. that something else might just be the vocals though. its hard to tell. nice job though.

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#3
Thanks, yeah the beat was made with fruity loops i usually use a keyboard to make the beat and the play in real time so it's more "humanized" sounding but my bro has the keyboard right now so basically gotta make do i guess thanks for the feedback!